Sunday, April 15, 2012

I Bow Before You!


I bow before you, for I am weak;
I bow before you, for my thoughts reek.
I bow before you, for I am frustrated;
I bow before you, for I am devastated.
I bow before you, for I feel heavy;
I bow before you, for my eyes feel soggy.
I bow before you, for I am tired;
I bow before you, for I am mired.
I bow before you, for I want only calm;
I bow before you, for only you won’t harm.

21 comments:

  1. Beautiful... serene and tranquil... true words..

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  2. Wow Neeraj! Very beautiful indeed!

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  3. Awesome lines Neeraj..Keep posting..:-)

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    1. Hey thanx Nagini for your encouraging comments.

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  4. the sense of submission to a Higher Power is so beautifully brought out in these few lines

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  5. Beautiful words!
    Keep up the good work!
    God bless you!

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  6. Thanx Deni for coming back and commenting.

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  7. wonderful thoughts!!

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  8. The words leave me charmed.
    Submission can happen when we not ego armed.
    Loved this poetry Neeraj.. Wonderfully written :)

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  9. Glad to have you back in the comment section. Thanx for your so wonderful comment.

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  11. Only he can respect our faith....

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