I bow before you, for I am weak;
I bow before you, for my thoughts reek.
I bow before you, for I am frustrated;
I bow before you, for I am devastated.
I bow before you, for I feel heavy;
I bow before you, for my eyes feel soggy.
I bow before you, for I am tired;
I bow before you, for I am mired.
I bow before you, for I want only calm;
I bow before you, for only you won’t harm.
beautifully written Neeraj :)
ReplyDeleteThanx Deb!
DeleteBeautiful... serene and tranquil... true words..
ReplyDeleteThanx for your comments Arti.
DeleteWow Neeraj! Very beautiful indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanx Amit Sir!
DeleteAwesome lines Neeraj..Keep posting..:-)
ReplyDeleteHey thanx Nagini for your encouraging comments.
Deletethe sense of submission to a Higher Power is so beautifully brought out in these few lines
ReplyDeleteThanx for your beautiful comment:)
DeleteBeautiful words!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
God bless you!
Thanx Deni for coming back and commenting.
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Thanx Sushmita!
ReplyDeleteThe words leave me charmed.
ReplyDeleteSubmission can happen when we not ego armed.
Loved this poetry Neeraj.. Wonderfully written :)
Glad to have you back in the comment section. Thanx for your so wonderful comment.
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ReplyDeleteThanx Himanshu
DeleteOnly he can respect our faith....
ReplyDeleteYes, True.
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