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| Little Sudeethi who inspired this post |
I wish that your eyes savour every hue that nature has,
I wish that your eyes savour every new that future has.
I wish that your eyes ask questions that change the world,
I wish that your eyes bask situations that arrange your world.
I wish that your eyes see beyond the veneer of ordinary,
I wish that your eyes break through the layer of quandary.
I wish that your eyes witness flight of try,
I wish that your eyes witness height of sky.
What a wishful poetry! Hope this turns out as her blessing as well.. :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you rhymed.
great rhyming and a nice wish list... Eyes convey a lot of things and you've inferred and worded it beautifully...
ReplyDeletevery beautifully written :)
ReplyDeletewhenever i visit here, her eyes talk :)
ReplyDelete@Sahana: Sure it will Sahana.
ReplyDelete@Anand:Thanx for ur comments Anand.
@Chintan: Yes, they do talk and these talking eyes compelled me to write an ode to them. Thanx for commenting Chintan.
I hope she gets to read what you wrote for her :)
ReplyDeleteA long wait but worth it.
My best wishes for those lovely eyes to witness all highs in upcoming life....
ReplyDeleteBTW came here through SUB's KHOJ and following you now....:))
@Purba: Yes I also hope so. And thanx for ur visit to my blog.
ReplyDelete@Irfanuddin:Thanx for ur wishes Irfan and thanx again for ur visit and becoming a follower.
wow a poem for sudeeti. that's so so sweet and a nice poem too
ReplyDelete@Sujatha: Thanx:)
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