Sunday, October 23, 2011

A Part of You is mine!

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Even if you are away, a part of your smile is still mine.
Even if you are not in my today, a part of your past is still mine.
I know you are not near, but a part of your fragrance is still with me,
I know you are not here, but a part of your essence is still with me.
Even if you are perfect now, a part of your dither is still mine,
Even if you are prudent now, a part of your error is still mine.
I know you run well now, but a part of your wobble is still with me,
I know you speak well now, but a part of your prattle is still with me.
Even if you are a star now, a part of your shine is still mine,
Even if you are popular now, a part of your oblivion is still mine.

Posted by Neeraj Kumar at 11:06 PM
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 24, 2011 at 2:18 AM

    Neeraj, I loved this to the T!!!!!!

    a part of your past, a part of your error :) very well written....

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  2. --October 24, 2011 at 2:57 AM

    This is really beautiful, Neeraj! Loved it :)

    "Even if you are not in my today, a part of your past is still mine." ~ So very true! :)

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  3. Saru SinghalOctober 24, 2011 at 7:46 AM

    Beautiful... Each line speaks volume:)

    Saru

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  4. Neeraj KumarOctober 24, 2011 at 1:02 PM

    @Chintan:Thanx for loving it Chintan.
    @Lady Fiona:Thanx for ur lovely comments Fiona.
    @Saru Singhal: Thanx for the lovely words.

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  5. The PoetOctober 25, 2011 at 3:18 AM

    Hello.
    Visiting from the group Bloggers.

    Expressions spoken from the heart.
    Truly beautiful.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Undress Me With Your Sultry Eyes

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  6. Neeraj KumarOctober 25, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    @Andy: Thanx Andy for visiting and giving ur lovely comments.

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  7. Neeraj KumarOctober 25, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    @Sujatha: Thanx for commenting.

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  8. sriramnivasOctober 27, 2011 at 11:05 PM

    Even if you blog to pass time, your words do mean a lot......nicely woven together with feelings and emotions; I enjoyed reading your creation.

    From: sriramnivas.wordpress.com

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  9. Neeraj KumarOctober 28, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    @Sri:Thax for ur comments Sri

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  10. RioZeeOctober 30, 2011 at 11:07 AM

    Neeraj , very well expressed. A part always remains.
    Great.

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  11. Subhrashis AdhikariOctober 30, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    beautifully expressed...part of you is all about her...:)

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  12. Neeraj KumarOctober 31, 2011 at 6:05 PM

    @Maun Vision: thanx for ur comments.
    @SUB: thanx SUB.

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  13. MenacheryNovember 2, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    :) this was just beautiful.... im glad you made me come here :)

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  14. Neeraj KumarNovember 3, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    @Menachery:Thanxxx

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  15. AnonymousNovember 6, 2011 at 4:18 PM

    very nice. lucky gal.. after a very long time read a beautiful poem

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  16. Kokz @ Love poemsNovember 7, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    So deep, very beautifully written, loved going through it :-)

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  17. Neeraj KumarNovember 7, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    @Some unspoken words: Thanx for such a complement!

    @Kokz: Thanx Kokz:)

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